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Spoon

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Wistfully wishing
your limber trunks
were turgidly tickling
the backs of my thighs
as I thirstily guide
each of your fingers
to graze between
my lips and tongue.
One of those sensations I take for granted until it's not there.
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Tetnician's avatar
I like this; however, as a mild nit...be careful with your adverbs. You could kill both "turgidly" and "thirstily" and it would be a stronger piece. That is keeping with the show, and don't tell premise. I liked it a lot though! Thanks for sharing.